on thursday me and the team five student went to the polyfest on thursday we had fun at the polyfest. I had fun at the polyfest we watched people dance on the stage.We had lunch and morning tea then we went to go and watched some more dancing on the stage.Then we had to go with our groups it was so fun at shop at polyfest then we buyed stuff at the shops.
Malo Maurice. Thank you for sharing some of the things you enjoyed at the Polyfest. I would like you to try writing this again, remember to read it allowed to yourself and then get a friend to read it back to you. I'll give you a little hint...there's few things that I think you'll agree need to be improved. Looking forward to reading your edited piece next.
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